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Interested in becoming a dog trainer?

I really want to work with dogs and become a dog trainer. I just love working with them. Problem is, i dont have my own dog My dad is convinced we dont need one… How could i go about diving deeper into dog training? Like hands on, not reading off of a website or book. [...]

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Where do you fish (20 char. minimum…)?

I know, it’s been asked before, but I want to go a bit deeper (no pun intended, but I’ll keep it around anyway) into the subject… I don’t care about acreage, or the name of the body of water… I want the “feel” of the area you fish… I know most of the regulars have [...]

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So, would you carry on reading?

Hey all This is the beginning of my novel, just looking for what works and what doesn’t. —— PROLOGUE — East Farwood Train Station. Platform Eight. Someone’s Story. The book was black and the pages were edged with a line of gold. Its face fell hard against the ground and the sound I should’ve heard [...]

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okay having a flash back day what do you think about?

okay a few hits of the 80′s what do you think? 1980…. Another One Bites the Dust – Queen You Shook Me All Night Long – AC/DC . Back In Black – AC/DC Crazy Train -Ozzy Osbourne Ace of Spades -Motorhead 1981…. Tom Sawyer …Rush For Those About To Rock (We Salute You)..AC/DC Limelight ..Rush [...]

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What do you think of the beginning of my story?

Here is the beginning of the first chapter of a story I am attempting to write. It is about a girl who becomes a knight and has to rescue her best friend. Nothing too cliche, though. There will be some twists. I’m 14 and this is something I hope to have published. Tell me what [...]

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Fake oprah aka Fay Koprah is… Poets, would you c/c?

(I apologize to any unfamiliar with this series, and offer this friendly warning: If you post in Poetry Y/A, you are in danger of appearing as a guest on Fay’s show… just sayin) Fay finished her breakfast of reconstituted jam on reconstituted toast and was wondering how rubber bands are made. She’d read and re-read [...]

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Every poem I have written with the words duck and Buk has been assassinated.. why would they be a violation?

So I am writing about Pelicans now I feel like an odd pelican on the beach watching as two birds war over one fish I just intent on the scene … out of my reach … The fish spirals… into the churning waters below the birds dive bomb and dance rhythmically as though for my [...]

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Itching to help with the shelter dog situation?

I’m feeling very unsettled and unsatisfied with the way my life is going at the moment. I volunteer twice a week (as a trainer and socializer) for the Humane Society, work hard to train my adopted Border Collie with basic obedience and the disc, spend ALL of my free time researching and working with dogs [...]

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I’m attempting to write a story… does my intro sound okay?

I am trying to write a story about how a girl becomes a knight (with a few twists… nothing to generic (:) Here is my story beginning. Read it and tell me if you would be interested in reading it and what I could do to improve it. Constructive criticism needed! Here it is… The [...]

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NEED To GIVE ADVICE! helppp.?

well my friend is going through some depression & he wrote this about the girl he likes; A HEART CARVED OUT OF EMPTY WORDS A funny feeling you give me In your eyes i stay, but it was just the reflection of a shadow, a reflection of air,another reason to take my dive, slit open [...]

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